tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13828728.post115158317853969566..comments2024-03-22T12:27:38.688-05:00Comments on Bayou Poste & Craft: Poetry Thursdayjenclairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06046532245054911248noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13828728.post-1151645585514841542006-06-30T00:33:00.000-05:002006-06-30T00:33:00.000-05:00The fourth stanza to me, makes the common phrase d...The fourth stanza to me, makes the common phrase distinct with much meaning than I give it would typically give credit. Poetry that makes one pause...Karodahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12659789966973636488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13828728.post-1151621305514863342006-06-29T17:48:00.000-05:002006-06-29T17:48:00.000-05:00No vacation, eh, Demosthenes?Wow! And as Lynn not...No vacation, eh, Demosthenes?<BR/><BR/>Wow! And as Lynn noted, to have this zinger amid all the everyday is bright, bright, bright.Jim Brockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408507847342833145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13828728.post-1151619436767579512006-06-29T17:17:00.000-05:002006-06-29T17:17:00.000-05:00how many ways this phrase can be used...and the la...how many ways this phrase can be used...and the last two lines invited a bit of tears. it is amazing what this simple phrase can invite. <BR/><BR/>i want to know more...liz elayne lamoreuxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16014874211913051234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13828728.post-1151607547948223252006-06-29T13:59:00.000-05:002006-06-29T13:59:00.000-05:00Jen, that's lovely and heartbreaking.Was it inspir...Jen, that's lovely and heartbreaking.<BR/><BR/>Was it inspired by the friend you were telling me about a week or two ago?Deb Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03322863748665701618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13828728.post-1151601950240878082006-06-29T12:25:00.000-05:002006-06-29T12:25:00.000-05:00What a lovely poem. So much said with so few words...What a lovely poem. So much said with so few words.Rianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15728394027261108470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13828728.post-1151598114532122332006-06-29T11:21:00.000-05:002006-06-29T11:21:00.000-05:00I had a friend who lose so much, including most sp...I had a friend who lose so much, including most speech, due to a stroke. She was killed last year by a drunk driver, after dealing with her disability, for years. i have her picture in my room and hear her voice say..."I know Iknow I know." Repition of this simple phrase, communicated most every she said. When she was excited she would say oh boy oh boy oh boy!! Your poem brought her here with me todaywendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14586814769281622578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13828728.post-1151592819551193212006-06-29T09:53:00.000-05:002006-06-29T09:53:00.000-05:00Such a tender poem. Great use of the repetition--i...Such a tender poem. Great use of the repetition--it anchors the poem and adds that little touch of hope tinged with sadness at the end. Beautiful.<BR/><BR/>Can't wait to explore your site.Januaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13828728.post-1151591477750583272006-06-29T09:31:00.000-05:002006-06-29T09:31:00.000-05:00Wow, I'm probably going to use one of those everyd...Wow, I'm probably going to use one of those everyday poetic phrases: profound! I like this poem!Sue Seiberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15079271353907261500noreply@blogger.com